Saturday, October 3, 2015

#SaturdayWordplay 5: Elysian

Elysian - (adj) relating to or characteristic of heaven or paradise.


In the cocoons of my mind
in the quiet rush
I hear the birds sing
over the planes abuzz.
Your breath raps with mine
the rustling leaves give the tune
standing still, yet dancing within
You & I
An Elysian Life
lost in nature's wilderness,
found, alive in the moment, in time!


©AditiKaushiva

Link up folks! Would love to read your take on this week's word prompt.
Elysian - (adj) relating to or characteristic of heaven or paradise.
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36 comments:

  1. Amita KaushivaOctober 3, 2015 at 6:18 PM

    Beautiful! Liked d feel of the quiet rush....keep writing my dear.

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  2. UnknownOctober 4, 2015 at 12:33 AM

    Beautiful sentiments , great expression!!

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  3. Sanaa RizviOctober 4, 2015 at 4:22 PM

    So beautiful so serene :)

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  4. AnonymousOctober 4, 2015 at 5:24 PM

    The rapping breaths are quite an image...!

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  5. Jae RoseOctober 4, 2015 at 5:47 PM

    A beautiful poem and image - heaven is different for each of us..and hopefully achievable in some way

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  6. MaryOctober 4, 2015 at 6:41 PM

    Sounds like a very special moment in time!

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  7. Sumana RoyOctober 4, 2015 at 7:55 PM

    love these moments of beauty...heavenly....

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  8. PanchaliOctober 4, 2015 at 8:12 PM

    Mesmerizing ....Nature is an art project that invites you to take action for the environment!

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  9. Magaly GuerreroOctober 4, 2015 at 9:40 PM

    Ah, the wondrous instant when a mind discovers is alive... and in good company.

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  10. brudbergOctober 5, 2015 at 12:04 AM

    What a wonderful place to be in.. I love the word .. divine :-)

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 5, 2015 at 12:08 AM

    The beauty of being alive and in love in this moment in time is beautiful to read....and to remember.

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  12. scotthastiepoetOctober 5, 2015 at 12:40 AM

    Alive in the moment indeed Aditi - I really enjoyed this... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  13. Gillena CoxOctober 5, 2015 at 1:31 AM

    Enjoyed the joy in this poem Aditi
    My poem today will not suit the Linky.
    Will link in another Sunday

    Much love...

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  14. SusanOctober 5, 2015 at 1:55 AM

    Joyful paradise, deep and alive. How fine!

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  15. DonnaOctober 5, 2015 at 4:11 AM

    Lovely like a prayer of peace...connecting with nature.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  16. Nicholas October 5, 2015 at 4:33 AM

    elysium is indeed a coveted place for healing and recovery. love it!

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  17. tonispencerOctober 5, 2015 at 5:58 AM

    what joy, what a bit of heaven we find in love and friendship. A very lovely poem. spencer is Kanzensakura

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  18. ZQOctober 5, 2015 at 7:09 AM

    Good for you... and well described.
    ZQ

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  19. Gen Giggles October 5, 2015 at 6:36 PM

    It does sound like the Elysian life was found.

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  20. Myrna R.October 5, 2015 at 11:01 PM

    How lovely! Sounds like a heavenly moment indeed.

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  21. Rosemary Nissen-WadeOctober 6, 2015 at 12:32 PM

    There is certainly a dancing quality to this!

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  22. divsiNovember 10, 2015 at 6:56 PM

    Lost and found in nature's wilderness! Ah! Lovely :):)

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  23. AditiDecember 13, 2015 at 9:37 PM

    Thank you everyone! :)

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