Seeing him sulk like that, she realized that she could no longer hide the truth.
Her love for him was stronger than the joyous feeling of winning a game.
She took a deep breath, fetched the chocolate bar from her bag and with a brave smile knocked at his door.
"Hey, I'm sorry, the winning 36 points were courtesy the dictionary, and here take this, you won the scrabble game fair and square!", she confessed in a single breath.
"Ha!! Sucker!! I knew elder sisters were good for nothing!", smirked the little one devouring the bitter-sweet taste of the win!
Her love for him was stronger than the joyous feeling of winning a game.
She took a deep breath, fetched the chocolate bar from her bag and with a brave smile knocked at his door.
"Hey, I'm sorry, the winning 36 points were courtesy the dictionary, and here take this, you won the scrabble game fair and square!", she confessed in a single breath.
"Ha!! Sucker!! I knew elder sisters were good for nothing!", smirked the little one devouring the bitter-sweet taste of the win!
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Ha! That was cute.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat! :D
DeleteWell done Aditi! you have cleverly combined 2 prompt effortlessly and elder sis know to take care f her younger sibling.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana...it was fun combining both the prompts! :)
DeleteWe elder sisters do this a lot ryt? :D bt seeing them cry wil melt our heart soon! Very well written aditi :)
ReplyDeleteI know!!! Can't see my younger one cry at all...though mostly I am the only reason she gets teary eyed! ;)
DeleteThe story of my life too... being motherly, giving, understanding... I guess, it comes with the role :D
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet tale, Aditi! ♥
Very frankly my younger is more caring and giving! :) Thanks!
DeleteAww..such a sweet one, Aditi. I have two elder brothers, so I know how to be on the receiving end! ;)
ReplyDeleteOh great! You must be pampered a lot then! ;)
DeleteO that's a very sweet one...sweeter than that chocolate bar :) Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteHaha thanks! :)
Deletethe squabble between the siblings!! that was really cute
ReplyDeleteThanks Raj! :)
DeleteIt's a reality that will surely relate to almost everyone...I liked the way you presented the event....lovely
ReplyDeleteThanks Shelly! :)
Deletehahaha :) Sweetly cute, Aditi :) A very caring elder sister ;) ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja! :)
Deletehe he he he .. I saw that happen so many times ,, although in our household the roles were reversed .. it was SHE doing this to me :) he he he
ReplyDeletebeautiful
Bikram
Well the roles were reversed here too! I was the bratty one n my younger sis the sweet caring one! ;)
DeleteYou can't go wrong with chocolate! I love this. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThanks Stephanie! Chocolate sure does melt you!
DeleteAditi, it is such a cute post! My younger brothers are like this brat too :)
ReplyDeleteHaha...they lucky to have you! ;)
DeleteAhhh took be back to my childhood...sweet tale of siblings!
ReplyDeleteA single step towards change
Thanks Nabs! :)
DeleteHa ha ha - so cute Aditi! can so relate to this:-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Eli! :)
DeleteLiked this, as others have said a cute tale.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura! :)
Deleteso sweet sis!! :)
ReplyDeleteHehe! It happens, even when I cheat, my face shows it and my younger siblings now know something is seriously fishy! :)) I saw you have linked two prompts remarkably in one post! Pretty cool!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shesha! :) Me and my elder cousin bro used to cheat a lot in the game of cards and enjoy teasing our younger siblings! We were not kind ;) :D
DeleteAwwww Aditi this such a sweeeet post.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha ji!
Deletehahahaha now that was supremelu cute!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Red!!! :)
DeleteLovely Piece!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pratik!
DeleteOH that little shit!! HA HA HA! This reminded me of how my son and daughter get along. Loved this! ♥
ReplyDeleteHaha...I think this is a story of every household! :D
DeleteYou elder sisters cheat a lot. For a change, you had the courage to come and admit it ;)
ReplyDeleteCheers
CRD
Updated mine. Do drop by.
Well this is fiction but I was a meany elder sis! ;)
Deletewe elder sister often sacrifice fr the little ones no?? But its a sweet feeling! totally relatable post!
ReplyDeleteGlad you could relate to this Nibhz!
DeleteHaha--so cute :) I'm just beginning to recover from April, but I wanted to stop by and thank you for your visits to my blogs and your wonderful comments... It was great to meet you through the A-to-Z challenge, and I look forward to staying in touch :)
ReplyDeleteGuilie @ Quiet Laughter
Same here Guilie! Loved interacting with you throughout A-Z. Hope to stay in touch! All the best!
DeleteOh, that brat! :D
ReplyDelete:D
DeleteThat was so sweet...elder sisters are the god-sent angels.
ReplyDeleteThey sure are! (My younger sis wouldn't agree though.. Evil grin!)
DeleteThis was so cute ! loved reading ! Thanks for all the comments for the challenge, and do hope to learn from you ! your blog is beautiful, and loved the way you have put the caption !
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind comment Angela! I loved your inspiring posts throughout A-Z! Do keep in touch!
DeleteSuch a cute story ... sibling love is always so special :-)
ReplyDeleteIt is!! :)
DeleteBittersweet chocolate and scrabble, what a match. Enjoyed your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments on my blog.
Nancy
Thanks a lot Nancy! :)
Deletethe story of every sibling :-D
ReplyDeleteSo true Meens! ;)
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