Wednesday, August 7, 2013

This means a lot to me

" Please dear, this means a lot to me! Let's go?".
He shrugged....Then smiled. 
He couldn't say no to those big beautiful eyes. They sat there watching the dancers spin and fly across the stage. 
He slyly checked his phone, thinking..
Was the ball a spin or a bouncer? 
Did it have enough flight?
*Love*

Linking this to the 55 Fiction prompt at Write Tribe. And the cue 'this means a lot to me' from #FMSphotoaday helped me get started.

For all the times you've encouraged and supported me in my weirdest of ventures...love you hubby.



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28 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 1:18 AM

    Oh Ho you both looks great together.. :-)
    And the lines are as lovely as you guys..Keep Rocking.. :-)

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  2. Karan SampatAugust 7, 2013 at 12:26 PM

    nice write...keep smiling..:)

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  3. BhavyaAugust 7, 2013 at 2:35 PM

    Awww :) That is a cute pic! :)

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  4. amita kaushivaAugust 7, 2013 at 8:14 PM

    Didn't know the effect 55 words could have! They relate such a beautiful story of pure love :) This is what we call short & sweet??

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  5. AnonymousAugust 7, 2013 at 8:35 PM

    I guess this is the fiction of today. Short and sweet :) - I am probably a geriatric case with my part 1 to 8 stories! Aditi, you write with a lot of impact!

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    1. AditiAugust 8, 2013 at 2:52 PM

      Thanks a lot Meera! :) You should give this 55 fiction a try...it's fun and challenging! Chk out the tutorial at Write Tribe...
      P.S. I loved the Wings n Root story and hopefully will catch up on 'The Gift'this weekend!

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  6. TexWisGirlAugust 8, 2013 at 10:42 PM

    that is sweet.

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  7. OurJaipur.ComAugust 8, 2013 at 11:28 PM

    Nice Write. . . :)

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  8. SatyaAugust 9, 2013 at 12:17 AM

    So beautiful!

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  9. AditiAugust 9, 2013 at 9:53 AM

    Thank you all!! :)

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  10. sulekkhaAugust 9, 2013 at 5:34 PM

    Lovely pic and story

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    1. AditiAugust 9, 2013 at 6:36 PM

      Thank you so much Sulekha! Let's catch up na sometime... U in town these days?

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  11. IndraniAugust 12, 2013 at 6:23 AM

    LOvely pic of togetherness.
    Perfect lines too.

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  12. a RatAugust 12, 2013 at 9:19 AM

    lovely pic. equally interesting 55er :)

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  13. magiceyeAugust 12, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    A thorough gentleman!

    Well done!

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  14. AnonymousAugust 13, 2013 at 1:01 PM

    You have described very well... LOVE means giving happiness :)

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    1. AditiAugust 15, 2013 at 10:32 AM

      It does! Your happiness is with their happiness :)

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  15. Ranveer vishalAugust 14, 2013 at 7:19 PM

    Hey Aditi, love-ly post and a perfect tribute to the love of ur life::)

    Vishal
    (www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com)

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  16. Richa SinghAugust 14, 2013 at 8:18 PM

    A beautiful picture of love and camaraderie you both share and of course the love filled 55er made us all smile :)

    Richa

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