You meet one person and your Life changes.
Is it really true?? he thought, sitting on the terrace gazing at the skyline.
Dejected. Lonely. Empty.
The high rise buildings with their twinkling lights in the far distance....
Promise or a Trap?? he questioned out loud.
THUD.
He never found answers to any of the questions.
He never found answers to any of the questions.
Note: I took the cue 'Skyline' from the FMS August Photo a day challenge and wrote a 55 fiction.
This is my first attempt at 55 Fiction and though a lot of fun, it was pretty challenging :D
Big thank you Vidya Sury for her excellent tutorial on Write Tribe.
I never knew the impact of just a few lines could be so great!! Really good Adi :)
ReplyDeleteThank u :)
DeleteGreat Lines.. :-)
ReplyDeleteSometimes Someone change our world either for Good or Bad..
Yes...so true!
DeleteDid he fall?Was it suicide?? temmemememeemememe
ReplyDeleteHe sadly ended his life!
ReplyDeleteThis is so close to reality, Aditi. Well done!
ReplyDeleteIsn't it!! Thank you so much Corinne:) :)
DeleteAditi, I love how you clubbed both prompts! Your 55 fiction is excellent. :-) Thank you! And yes, I have my Sat-Sun combi post up :D
ReplyDeleteThank u...thank u Vidya! Gained confidence in 55, now that u said it! Your brilliant tutorial helped a lot and I'll try to write some more :)
DeleteOhh :(
ReplyDeleteI know :(
DeleteNice.. and as Corinne said, close to reality; sadly.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vaisakh! Welcome to my humble space :)
DeleteOops ! as fast as that split of a second decision :(
ReplyDeleteBrilliant and so sad! Well done!
ReplyDeleteMaybe he looked more on to the bleak side of life.....
ReplyDeleteNice post!
Thank you all!!
ReplyDeleteThere are somethings in line for which we have no answers, as you've put it so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteCheerz
Vishal
Sadly that's true Vishal!
Deleteaaaahh this one was quite an interesting build up!
ReplyDeleteRicha
Thanks Richa! :)
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