"She's finally coming home", Manya smiled teary-eyed.
Rick looked at his wife lovingly...
...the wrinkles beneath her eyes and the little grey in her hair...the signs of a long wait.
He had hated himself for not being able to gift her the joy of motherhood.
But Adoption was going to complete their family today.
Linking this to Day 8 of the FMSphotoaday challenge and the 55 Fiction prompt at the Write Tribe
Rick looked at his wife lovingly...
...the wrinkles beneath her eyes and the little grey in her hair...the signs of a long wait.
He had hated himself for not being able to gift her the joy of motherhood.
But Adoption was going to complete their family today.
Linking this to Day 8 of the FMSphotoaday challenge and the 55 Fiction prompt at the Write Tribe
Nice, I Like it. .
ReplyDeleteGlad u liked it!! :)
DeleteGreat Lines...and the composition is simply lovely..Moreover I believe that adoption is not a thing of social stigma and your lines just add to it.. :-)
ReplyDeleteAgree with you...Adoption is a beautiful thing! Not only the child finds a home, it is the start of a new life for all involved!
Deleteemotions depicted very well in 55 words....liked it
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear :)
DeleteThis is a great story on love and life. Adoption is fast becoming a way to put things right in many people's lives...
ReplyDeleteRicha
True dear! Thanks for stopping by! :)
DeleteBeautiful one on adoption. We need to change mindset of some conservative people:)
ReplyDeleteVishal
www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
Thanks Vishal! We definitely need to...people should realize the important role adoption is playing in today's modern lives.
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