Monday, August 12, 2013

A Sign



Grey clouds accompanied by thunder
A sign inauspicious! they said
But happy she was,
Under the rain they would tie the knot!

Rain kissed roses he was bringing
Sunshine in his heart, a skip in his step
But a slip unfortunate, he didn't see
The roses lay scattered, the red all splattered.

Dressed in pretty, with dreams in her eyes
A life full of possibilities, she beamed...
Unaware, that he lay there...his last breath
whispering only her name.

Note: Prompt 'A Sign' for the August Photo a day challenge day 7. I'm running behind...with the lovely extended weekend, even my mind had gone off wandering :) :)
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2013 at 1:12 PM

    So emotional and Intense.. :-)
    And again love coming to an sad end.. :-(

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    1. AditiAugust 13, 2013 at 2:13 PM

      Thanks :) you know I didn't mean to make it sad...somehow the grey sky made me write like that.

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  2. Manav SinghiAugust 12, 2013 at 5:14 PM

    Nice Read and Pic. . .

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  3. TexWisGirlAugust 12, 2013 at 10:01 PM

    ouch! tragic!

    i had heard it is good luck if it rains on your wedding day - in this case, not!

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    1. AditiAugust 13, 2013 at 2:15 PM

      Wedding in rains...isn't it romantic! I had actually started out with this feeling but somewhere in between tragedy struck :(

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  4. AnonymousAugust 13, 2013 at 1:33 PM

    tragic love story....written very well

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    1. AditiAugust 13, 2013 at 2:16 PM

      Thank you so much...so good to see you here! :)

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