Take a Moment, Life Said....
Pause & Look, as you gently tread,
From darkness to Light
Just breathe in the sights
Take a Moment, Life Said
Take a Moment to be Happy, Gracious & Kind
Life is too short, to be looking behind
Push away these worries from your pretty head
Just smile & laugh at them instead
Take a Moment & look around
See the beautiful lotus in the muddy pond
Million stars shining brightly in the night sky
Let it hypnotize, Let it give you a High
Take a Moment, Life Said....
Let go, take my hand & enjoy being lead
Dance with me, Sway with me...Don't be uptight
Just believe, even the gloomiest days will turn out bright
Take a moment, Life Said
Loved the poem , every sranza is beautiful just the way life is beautiful and amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kislaya :) life is truly beautiful...in its little moments...in its simplicity!!
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DeleteVery beautifully written dear :) Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
DeleteFull of positivism!Really inspiring, simple & beautiful Aditi!
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much...my first attempt at poetry and your words really keep me going!! :)
DeleteThis is my absolute favourite pic! And the poem justifies it completely!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear!! :)
DeleteWow!, first 'Passersby' and now 'Take a moment, life said' favorites! One can relate them, and to them a lot ...
ReplyDeleteAwesome click ..
Beautiful poem ! great going ..
:) thanks dear!! Frankly, I take pride in these two posts in particular.... They surprised me as well!! Blogging is helping me realize my capabilities and thanks to all of you who are encouraging me in this!!
Deletevery well written. exactly taking time for oneself and retrospection with a smile can surely help to change our personality and of course gives tranquility to the mind.
ReplyDeleteWell said Niranjan!!Keep :)
DeleteBeautiful, thank you so much for sharing
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my humble blog Lou!! Thanks a lot...glad u liked it :)
DeleteIt sounds so simple yet it is one of the hardest things to d o in life. To just stand for a moment and appreciate life, is almost impossible for the larger population.
ReplyDeleteMay be it takes something special to realize that life happens around you and not in some place far far way.
Spoken like a true philosopher Rupert!! :)
DeleteHey! Now you are just making fun of me. :P
Delete:) no, seriously!!
DeleteMagic is woven into words.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear!!
Deletevery beautiful Aditi ...So true..Just stand and stare and you will see magic unfold
ReplyDeleteThanks Shiva :)
Delete"Take a moment" something that you learn over time... nice work... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert! I have so much to learn from all of you...your kind words really help me going!
DeleteI love the message in this poem........those moments are the true wealth we have. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sherry! So glad to have you here!
Deletethere is good wisdom in this...to take a moment...look around at all the beauty...to not let the world overwhelm you....
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian! Welcome to my humble space! Nature is a great teacher, you just have to open your eyes and look around!
DeleteSo optimistic! Lovely. Welcome to Poets United :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Loredana :) Poets United has opened up a whole new world for me!
DeleteThis is beautiful. What a wonderful reminder to us to savor all that is in our environment....all the beauty that surrounds us. And welcome to Poets United. So glad to have you posting with us. And I hope to see you again and again. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteWise and beautiful and echos my philosophy on life. Thank you.
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