Saturday, October 3, 2015

#SaturdayWordplay 5: Elysian

Elysian - (adj) relating to or characteristic of heaven or paradise.


In the cocoons of my mind
in the quiet rush
I hear the birds sing
over the planes abuzz.
Your breath raps with mine
the rustling leaves give the tune
standing still, yet dancing within
You & I
An Elysian Life
lost in nature's wilderness,
found, alive in the moment, in time!


©AditiKaushiva

Link up folks! Would love to read your take on this week's word prompt.
Elysian - (adj) relating to or characteristic of heaven or paradise.

36 comments:

  1. Beautiful! Liked d feel of the quiet rush....keep writing my dear.

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  2. Beautiful sentiments , great expression!!

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  3. The rapping breaths are quite an image...!

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  4. A beautiful poem and image - heaven is different for each of us..and hopefully achievable in some way

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  5. Sounds like a very special moment in time!

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  6. love these moments of beauty...heavenly....

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  7. Mesmerizing ....Nature is an art project that invites you to take action for the environment!

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  8. Ah, the wondrous instant when a mind discovers is alive... and in good company.

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  9. What a wonderful place to be in.. I love the word .. divine :-)

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  10. The beauty of being alive and in love in this moment in time is beautiful to read....and to remember.

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    1. It's such a beautiful feeling, no? :)

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  11. Alive in the moment indeed Aditi - I really enjoyed this... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  12. Enjoyed the joy in this poem Aditi
    My poem today will not suit the Linky.
    Will link in another Sunday

    Much love...

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    1. Thanks Gillena. I'll tag you nextime. :)

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  13. Joyful paradise, deep and alive. How fine!

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  14. Lovely like a prayer of peace...connecting with nature.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  15. elysium is indeed a coveted place for healing and recovery. love it!

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  16. what joy, what a bit of heaven we find in love and friendship. A very lovely poem. spencer is Kanzensakura

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  17. Good for you... and well described.
    ZQ

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  18. It does sound like the Elysian life was found.

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  19. How lovely! Sounds like a heavenly moment indeed.

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  20. There is certainly a dancing quality to this!

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  21. Lost and found in nature's wilderness! Ah! Lovely :):)

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