Friday, December 5, 2014

Revenge

Sitting in a compact, low-lit CCTC surveillanced cabin in the interiors of the dense Boreal forests, Keisha banged her fist against the table in one jubilant stroke.

"At last!" she smiled triumphantly as she looked at the gory pictures blinking on her mobile screen.

"You thought you could keep me locked here in this hell hole, feeling neglected and sorry for myself? Hoping that I would die of starvation? Now look who is shamelessly licking his own blood, dear husband!!" Keisha hurled curses at her dead husband, licking her dry lips every now and then, tasting the sweet revenge.

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Written for Three Word Wednesday
Words : Compact, Jubilant, Neglected

28 comments:

  1. One can feel the pain of Keisha, the ruthlessness of her tormentor and finally the jubilation that surpassed all other emotions! Aditi, you have woven a gory tale around the three words!

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  2. wow... that was unexpected :D
    gory and evil in such a short span!

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  3. woaa!!! that's some story!! I am wondering what must have happened before that??
    Well written

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    1. Yes, that!
      Maybe I can make a bigger story out of this...will see!

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    2. Yes, that!
      Maybe I can make a bigger story out of this...will see!

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  4. This is nice :D There's a book you know where a woman kills her husband and eats him for dinner every day !

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    1. Really?? Need to know the name please! ;)

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  5. Now that is revenge! Brilliantly executed. ♥

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  6. That was some twist!! Good one, Aditi!

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  7. Wow, that was gory but amazing!

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  8. Damn....your narration was crisp and effective!

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  9. Wow, lots of emotion in a short word count. PHEW! Brutal. I wouldn't want to cross her!

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    1. Haha :) Cathy what of she offers you partnership? ;)

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