Wednesday, August 7, 2013

This means a lot to me

" Please dear, this means a lot to me! Let's go?".
He shrugged....Then smiled. 
He couldn't say no to those big beautiful eyes. They sat there watching the dancers spin and fly across the stage. 
He slyly checked his phone, thinking..
Was the ball a spin or a bouncer? 
Did it have enough flight?
*Love*

Linking this to the 55 Fiction prompt at Write Tribe. And the cue 'this means a lot to me' from #FMSphotoaday helped me get started.

For all the times you've encouraged and supported me in my weirdest of ventures...love you hubby.



28 comments:

  1. Oh Ho you both looks great together.. :-)
    And the lines are as lovely as you guys..Keep Rocking.. :-)

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  2. Awww :) That is a cute pic! :)

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  3. Didn't know the effect 55 words could have! They relate such a beautiful story of pure love :) This is what we call short & sweet??

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  4. I guess this is the fiction of today. Short and sweet :) - I am probably a geriatric case with my part 1 to 8 stories! Aditi, you write with a lot of impact!

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    1. Thanks a lot Meera! :) You should give this 55 fiction a try...it's fun and challenging! Chk out the tutorial at Write Tribe...
      P.S. I loved the Wings n Root story and hopefully will catch up on 'The Gift'this weekend!

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    1. Thank you so much Sulekha! Let's catch up na sometime... U in town these days?

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  6. LOvely pic of togetherness.
    Perfect lines too.

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  7. lovely pic. equally interesting 55er :)

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    1. Thank u so much n welcome to my space!

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  8. A thorough gentleman!

    Well done!

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    1. Ah that he is! :) :) thanks so much!

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  9. You have described very well... LOVE means giving happiness :)

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    1. It does! Your happiness is with their happiness :)

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  10. Hey Aditi, love-ly post and a perfect tribute to the love of ur life::)

    Vishal
    (www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com)

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  11. A beautiful picture of love and camaraderie you both share and of course the love filled 55er made us all smile :)

    Richa

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