Saturday, August 3, 2013

Skyline

You meet one person and your Life changes. 
Is it really true?? he thought, sitting on the terrace gazing at the skyline.
Dejected. Lonely. Empty.
The high rise buildings with their twinkling lights in the far distance....
Promise or a Trap?? he questioned out loud.
THUD.
He never found answers to any of the questions.



Note: I took the cue 'Skyline' from the FMS August Photo a day challenge and wrote a 55 fiction.
This is my first attempt at 55 Fiction and though a lot of fun, it was pretty challenging :D
Big thank you Vidya Sury for her excellent tutorial on Write Tribe.


22 comments:

  1. I never knew the impact of just a few lines could be so great!! Really good Adi :)

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  2. Great Lines.. :-)
    Sometimes Someone change our world either for Good or Bad..

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  3. Did he fall?Was it suicide?? temmemememeemememe

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  4. This is so close to reality, Aditi. Well done!

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    1. Isn't it!! Thank you so much Corinne:) :)

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  5. Aditi, I love how you clubbed both prompts! Your 55 fiction is excellent. :-) Thank you! And yes, I have my Sat-Sun combi post up :D

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    1. Thank u...thank u Vidya! Gained confidence in 55, now that u said it! Your brilliant tutorial helped a lot and I'll try to write some more :)

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  6. Nice.. and as Corinne said, close to reality; sadly.

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    1. Thanks a lot Vaisakh! Welcome to my humble space :)

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  7. Oops ! as fast as that split of a second decision :(

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  8. Brilliant and so sad! Well done!

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  9. Maybe he looked more on to the bleak side of life.....

    Nice post!

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  10. There are somethings in line for which we have no answers, as you've put it so beautifully.

    Cheerz
    Vishal

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  11. aaaahh this one was quite an interesting build up!

    Richa

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